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SHADOW DANCING (acrostic)
Posted by Maggie
on Sunday, February 22, 2009
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Slowly began the music
Helping two hearts blend
As they reached in anticipation
Dancing to a different beat
Oblivious to any other
Watching the birth of a union
Darting in and out
Apart from the world
No longer in the shadows
Crowds soon disappeared
In each dancer`s eyes
Noticing only each other
Gliding with heated emotions.
Oh my I say, how delightful, good feeding.
perfect !! and so romantic too :)
A Nice Concept ... liked it ... more after reading you here ...
I have tried my hands on this too - not very sure if I could do justice to this ... plz check once and let me know ...
Exactly what dance is! Beautiful. I only wish I knew how to do it!
Delightful dancing indeed :)
Excellent acrostic ... the dancing and romance - gorgeous. JP/deb
Oh so beautiful...this flows.
I will learn from you!
TJ
Amias, Pretty Me, Tan, Sandy, Winnie the poohi, JP/deb, and TJ...
Thank you all for dropping by and leaving such wonderful comments:)
Nice poem. I like the phrase "birth of a union". Full of emotion and passion.
A wonderful acrostic, very, very well-written.